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1 My Loving on January 28th 2012, 1:26 pm

GAF

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I think of you,
More than you'd believe.
I see someone great,
Whos loving i want to receive.

Your my shining star,
As special as a knight.
Your loving makes,
Everything all right.

It maybe tough,
People can read me and you like a book.
But you and me,
Makes me feel hooked.

I'm gonna love you 'til i die,
You, me, together.
What could be better?

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2 Re: My Loving on January 28th 2012, 1:33 pm

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I read this poem of yours on another forum and reading it a second time, still makes me smile. It's a very sweet poem that I enjoy.

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3 Re: My Loving on January 28th 2012, 1:39 pm

GAF

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Thanks Delighted First one I wrote in years so I am not at my best.

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4 Re: My Loving on January 28th 2012, 9:46 pm

Qwerty

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I agree with Lunar. Very sweet.

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5 Re: My Loving on January 29th 2012, 10:40 am

GAF

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Thanks for the comment, glad you like it.

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6 Re: My Loving on January 29th 2012, 10:51 am

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I have read this on another forum and I very much like it

Keep writing now you have started again Ecstatic

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7 Re: My Loving on January 29th 2012, 11:20 am

GAF

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Thanks fiona Delighted Glad you like it.

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8 Re: My Loving on January 29th 2012, 11:43 am

EvanP

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Excellent, I really like it, keep writing poems GAF. Delighted

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9 Re: My Loving on January 31st 2012, 1:35 pm

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Thanks Evan Delighted Kind comments are appreciated as they inspire me to write more.

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