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1Autumn(Highlights) Empty Autumn(Highlights) January 28th 2012, 1:26 pm

StevenF50

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A land of green,
Turning into a land of brown,
Crunching leaves under foot,
Wading through their endless mess,
Leaveless tress roam the country side,
Like skeletons of nature,
Cool rain washes away the summer,
Drenching everything around,
Harvest comes,
Full of fruits and vegtables,
Halloween and all it's scares,
Fell in this season,
A season of brown,of wet,of cold, of crops, of scares,
Autumn has come.

One of my highlights in other words a few of my best poems.

2Autumn(Highlights) Empty Re: Autumn(Highlights) January 28th 2012, 1:50 pm

Voldemort

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Nice poem, I really like it. I can see it being painted over one of those brown-green-red-orange-yellow abstract paintings that usually represent autumn. The whole poem is lovely, but I particularly love the first three stanzas, they remind me of something.

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3Autumn(Highlights) Empty Re: Autumn(Highlights) January 28th 2012, 1:52 pm

StevenF50

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Thanks Delighted And finally someone actually says more than nice poem Bleh

4Autumn(Highlights) Empty Re: Autumn(Highlights) January 28th 2012, 1:55 pm

Whatif

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It's a pretty stereotypical poem but the line i did really like was: skeletons of nature.

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5Autumn(Highlights) Empty Re: Autumn(Highlights) January 28th 2012, 1:56 pm

StevenF50

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Thanks and yeah I was tasked with this poem and if it doesn't come from my heart then it normally involves a hell of a lot of inspiration from other poems which makes it a common poem.

6Autumn(Highlights) Empty Re: Autumn(Highlights) January 28th 2012, 9:47 pm

Qwerty

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Reminds me of crunching leaves.

7Autumn(Highlights) Empty Re: Autumn(Highlights) January 29th 2012, 5:58 am

StevenF50

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Well it is the third line Bleh

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