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1My Loving Empty My Loving January 28th 2012, 1:26 pm

GAF

GAF
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I think of you,
More than you'd believe.
I see someone great,
Whos loving i want to receive.

Your my shining star,
As special as a knight.
Your loving makes,
Everything all right.

It maybe tough,
People can read me and you like a book.
But you and me,
Makes me feel hooked.

I'm gonna love you 'til i die,
You, me, together.
What could be better?

2My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 28th 2012, 1:33 pm

LunarScorpio

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I read this poem of yours on another forum and reading it a second time, still makes me smile. It's a very sweet poem that I enjoy.

3My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 28th 2012, 1:39 pm

GAF

GAF
Novice Poster
Thanks Delighted First one I wrote in years so I am not at my best.

4My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 28th 2012, 9:46 pm

Qwerty

Qwerty
Active Poster
I agree with Lunar. Very sweet.

5My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 29th 2012, 10:40 am

GAF

GAF
Novice Poster
Thanks for the comment, glad you like it.

6My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 29th 2012, 10:51 am

fiona1964

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I have read this on another forum and I very much like it

Keep writing now you have started again Ecstatic

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7My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 29th 2012, 11:20 am

GAF

GAF
Novice Poster
Thanks fiona Delighted Glad you like it.

8My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 29th 2012, 11:43 am

EvanP

EvanP
Heartless Hind
Excellent, I really like it, keep writing poems GAF. Delighted

9My Loving Empty Re: My Loving January 31st 2012, 1:35 pm

GAF

GAF
Novice Poster
Thanks Evan Delighted Kind comments are appreciated as they inspire me to write more.

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