A few suggestions: Overall, the text and images are huge, and don't seem to be contained in any sort of div. I suggest setting a div, and decreasing their sizes(the text and images respectively) so that it's easier to read, and doesn't take as long to recognize. Also, the text colors are a bit bland IMO, maybe just make them all closer to white instead of grey? Also, I recommend making the page look exactly like your index and other pages so that it doesn't look like you've left the site; just for the sake of consistency