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1 Me and You on January 28th 2012, 1:25 pm

StevenF50

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Our relationship is strong from the first day,
It's not long before nothing can stand in our way,
Our love for each other is infinite,
The fact we'll stay together is definite,
Your my first love,
You gave my life that happy shove,
You are my will to live,
There's so much I'm to give,
To you,
For your are my will,my soul,my love.

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2 Re: Me and You on January 28th 2012, 8:48 pm

Whatif

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You and I*

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3 Re: Me and You on January 28th 2012, 8:49 pm

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This is exactly how to put into words, what it feels like to have a first love. Nice.

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4 Re: Me and You on January 28th 2012, 8:55 pm

Whatif

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I don't think so. Although the poem is nice, the message is wrong.

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5 Re: Me and You on January 28th 2012, 9:49 pm

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I agree that the message is wrong.

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6 Re: Me and You on January 29th 2012, 5:56 am

StevenF50

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You would have thought it was a story with a moral, it's a poem. You don't have a wrong message in poetry, it's from the heart, it may be wrong but that doesn't matter in poetry, that's the wonder of poems.

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